Hello again Melissa, I hope your weekend is going great! Once again, I truly believe that your idea is a great solution to us dog owners because we really want to spend the most of the time we can with our dogs and try to do our homework and study at the same time. I think that you have really improved your pitch since the last two of them. Great job.
Good pitch, Melissa. I enjoyed how you brought your dog into the pitch. In business writing, we also had a elevator pitch assignment and in that assignment I was commended for wearing a shirt pertaining to my business topic. You have done this with bringing your dog in your pitch, and I commend that too. Once again, good work!
Hello again Melissa, I hope your weekend is going great! Once again, I truly believe that your idea is a great solution to us dog owners because we really want to spend the most of the time we can with our dogs and try to do our homework and study at the same time. I think that you have really improved your pitch since the last two of them. Great job.
ReplyDeleteGood pitch, Melissa. I enjoyed how you brought your dog into the pitch. In business writing, we also had a elevator pitch assignment and in that assignment I was commended for wearing a shirt pertaining to my business topic. You have done this with bringing your dog in your pitch, and I commend that too. Once again, good work!
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